Not always have I been this ugly mass of flesh.
I had a face once considered to be decent.
Did play hide and seek in the old ruins of Cisthene.
Many pale faced men
have been awed by my beauty.
Brave forms and sun balmed skins, enslaved by my aura.
My voice, said to be as sweet as the nectar in the fresh blossoms, that the bees suck and love being wasted.
But now, it’s just wistful yesterday’s that pierce my heart like shards of broken glass.
All these years reiterating the same words,
What was my fault?
My only fault, I lay trust on him and let him lure me to the temple of Athena.
Little did I know that he had veiled evil temptations under the blanket of the dark.
Robbed me of my chastity!
Before I could collect myself
The goddess of wisdom appeared.
Athena, mad with rage,
For we had littered her sanctious abode.
Then the curse she spake
echoes in my ears ever since.
A head full of adders for hair
A face so hideous, intended only to scare.
Yes! I do wish to be loved my a man,
His fingers to run down my spine exploring every inch of my skin.
Like a man lapping the beads of dew from the blades of grasses to quench his thirst.
I want to be loved thus!
But alas! In vain,
For I am destined to be so cold,
That the eyes that meet mine
Are turned to stone.
Β© wordpolitics.
πππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππ…………..nicely written.
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Awhhh!!! Thank you so much.
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Well written & nicely done. Might this be a metaphor for your own life, all I can says it the heart wants what the heart wants. It’s the nature of being human. β€
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Thank you.
Well not really personal.
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An excellent poetic description of the mythical origins of Medusa.
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Thank you for appreciating.
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Well written miss ..this is applicable in our life …loved it miss
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Awhh!!! Thank you so much Rezia for your kind appreciation.
Yes it is metaphorical.
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what deep and beautiful poem
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Thank You.
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Striking words.
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Glad you liked it.
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ππΎππΎππΎππΎππΎ AWESOME POEMππΎππΎππΎ β€ IT
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excellent. congrats.
correct the typo in line 7.
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Sorry???
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I don’t think so there are any typing errors
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Ohh ok thank you so much for pointing it out.
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Your writings are wonderfully penned.
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Thank You for appreciating my work.
Glad you liked it.
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very nice
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Thank you kindly.
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As you may know, Medusa was cursed by the goddess Athena for having been raped by the god Poseidon in Athena’s temple, thus defiling it. Certainly, an unjust punishment for the victim.
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Yes I’m well aware of that.
Thus cries Medusa!!!
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I love this!!
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Thank you Grady
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A really great poem! love this lineβ¦ But now, itβs just wistful yesterdayβs that pierce my heart like shards of broken glass.
Dwight
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Thank you so much rothpoetry.
Glad that you felt the connection intended.
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Excellent poem! I’ve never felt sorry for Medusa until now.
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Thank You so much Priscilla.
It is sad indeed.
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That was beautiful. I never saw the story of medusa in quite that way. Beautifully written!!
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I’m glad that I was able to justify my work.
Thank you so much.
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You welcome!!
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Isn’t that so often the way?
Put into a box that isn’t us… by other people’s stuff.
As relevant as ever – and captured so poignantly.
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That you so much@Woodsy.
Yes you’re right every time it’s the same we are always forced to take up a pretence.
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Really, really, really nice!
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Thank you @benjamin4
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Welcome π
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Nicely articulated
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Thank You Kaushal
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Great poem!
One correction, and a thought. The line should be βYes! I do wish to be loved by a man,β.
The thought is that this poem is also a great metaphor for getting old.
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Than you.
I appreciate that.
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It’s brilliant.
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Thank you Cindy.π
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Nicely done. I’ve always been fascinated by Medusa. I like the take of her still craving that love. If there isn’t one, there should be a story where THE man willingly puts on a blindfold and allows love to grow between them by words and actions instead of her just being a monster.
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I would like to thank you for appreciating my work and providing an insight.
Would surely work on that!!!
Thank you once again.
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Beautiful poem! I wrote an article considering the injustice treatment of innocent and victim Medusa in history and art. I don’t forgive Donatello or Caravaggio for having represented the Medusa as a monster while Perseus was nothing than a hired assassin and a coward too. Besides he wouldn’t have won the Medusa with his “braveryβ alone without help by gods. But this is another wicked way to demonize women throughout the millennia.
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Indeed!!!
I agree with you.
I don’t see her as a monster in anyway but a woman yet again used to serve the selfish purpose of a man, and thus branded .
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If you like Iβll send you the link of the article in my site.
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Yes please.
Would love to read.
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Here is the article I promised you https://thescienceofintuition.org/2017/05/22/medusa-ancora/
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Thanks. Lemme go through it.π
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Hey ! I’m not being able to open this link. π£
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Sorry, maybe I sent you the wrong one…I’ try again
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Ok.
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Try this link https://thescienceofintuition.org/2017/05/22/medusa-ancora/
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It isn’t working.
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When I click on it it works fine.
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Try this one…I published it over again
https://thescienceofintuition.org/2020/04/27/violenze-culturali/
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Hey!
I read your article it’s beautifully penned and rational.
I could develop only respect for the mind that penned such thought.
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Thank you dear, Well, I’m glad you finally were able to read it. I don’t know what was the problem I wrote more about the issue also poetry. If you are interested I may send you some other links. Do you have a Facebook profile? Because I use fb a lot since I’m also devoted to the cause of defending the animals. For justice and freedom and against any form of oppression of the helpless living beings.
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Yes you can search as Upashna Singh
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There are a few. Which one is you. Or else you try. My name is unique in the world
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In case it doesn’t work still I may send it to you by email
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Ooh, thatβs a much deeper look into the Medusa myth than Iβve ever delved. Itβs far more tragic than I was aware. Nicely presented.
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Thank you Nobbinmaug.
It is very tragic!
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This is really cool! Interesting hearing it in Medusa’s voice with a touch of vulnerabiity….wow. Thank You and Cheers!
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Thank you so much @forresting365.
Glad you appreciate it.
Cheers!!!
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My pleasure! π
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Ok eye’s I agree typo.
Any other?
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Ok thank you
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None taken.
Open to feedbacks.
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Wow, beautifully written dear β€οΈ
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Awhhh!! Thank you
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Greek myth always fascinates us in its elegance. Medusa is such adorable one and now more beautiful she is in your own words.
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Awhh!!! Thank you so much. Yes I do agree Medusa or in fact all greek myths are enticing.
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Glad I come across your blog, quite rich content. Keep up the good work!
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Thank you Mahesh .
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That is beautiful!
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Thank you.
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Beautifull work!
Greetings from Argentina.
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Thank you so much.
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So well written.β€οΈ
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Thanks. Glad you liked it.,π€
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